In general not bad, but pleasesketch a diagram how this is supposed to work. it looks like a car wreck. at same time, why does this have to be seven stories tall. the depth behind is massive. but test it and see if needs that much space in the back or that much height. Finally, cut paper by hand and use geometry you have to match the properties of the site and the building to both integrate them into your geometry and your geometry into them. finally, please be precise about how large your project has to be. but to be precise you need to test variations. try two floor height, one floor height three floor height and so on.
In general not bad, but pleasesketch a diagram how this is supposed to work. it looks like a car wreck. at same time, why does this have to be seven stories tall. the depth behind is massive. but test it and see if needs that much space in the back or that much height. Finally, cut paper by hand and use geometry you have to match the properties of the site and the building to both integrate them into your geometry and your geometry into them. finally, please be precise about how large your project has to be. but to be precise you need to test variations. try two floor height, one floor height three floor height and so on.
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