Find a better way to integrate people into the building and create a better ground for the plaza -- do whatever you want with that ground. There is something very crisp about your rendering that i like. Texture the surface but maybe not the module. Plans are ok, but your partition walls inside and outside should have more of the intensity of some of your physical models. The perimiter of the building is nice, but needs variation, the interior bland -- needs some cutout in floor. Shouldn't be just one big flat floor. SEction is nice, but remove some of the tower floors from it. maybe even the building in the background. but let's see.
Find a better way to integrate people into the building and create a better ground for the plaza -- do whatever you want with that ground. There is something very crisp about your rendering that i like. Texture the surface but maybe not the module. Plans are ok, but your partition walls inside and outside should have more of the intensity of some of your physical models. The perimiter of the building is nice, but needs variation, the interior bland -- needs some cutout in floor. Shouldn't be just one big flat floor. SEction is nice, but remove some of the tower floors from it. maybe even the building in the background. but let's see.
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