Sang, ok in these you need to give me an indication of how you are using the site, i think its not enough at the moment and that these planes should have some scheme in terms of their organization.they can and should push out over the sidewalks and the plaza. But please also make the site white and get rid of the black. its too distracting. i also am not sure about how or why you are cutting into the buidling. i would let the floors remain their rectangular shape as you are doing, but also i would think twice or investigate more the triangular aperture
Sang, ok in these you need to give me an indication of how you are using the site, i think its not enough at the moment and that these planes should have some scheme in terms of their organization.they can and should push out over the sidewalks and the plaza. But please also make the site white and get rid of the black. its too distracting. i also am not sure about how or why you are cutting into the buidling. i would let the floors remain their rectangular shape as you are doing, but also i would think twice or investigate more the triangular aperture
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