Hey, the plans look pretty nice, the section, is a bit lacking in terms of the spatial qualities you'd been able to get previously with the other models. the apertures from the cutouts look more caricatured than geometrical/spatial. Some qualities are decent. I actually think that for portfolio and final submission you should take previous model and integrate it into final. I know there isn't really much time left but if you want to chat, i'll show you what i mean. are you at pratt at all tomorrow?
Hey, the plans look pretty nice, the section, is a bit lacking in terms of the spatial qualities you'd been able to get previously with the other models. the apertures from the cutouts look more caricatured than geometrical/spatial. Some qualities are decent. I actually think that for portfolio and final submission you should take previous model and integrate it into final. I know there isn't really much time left but if you want to chat, i'll show you what i mean. are you at pratt at all tomorrow?
ReplyDeleteI will not be around tomorrow, but I think I have an idea about what you are saying.
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