The bottom rendering is pretty good as far as orientation goes. i'd like to see through it to the city, but also something more specific happen on the ground and some people somewhere, though i'm a bit like you and generally don't like people and so don't include them in my renderings
The plan, i'm not sure about that bath-tub wall that it carves into. Same with section. But in addition, i feel like you have more intense sections than that from before. and something has to register in terms of the site -- like it shouldn't just rest on the ground but should have its own. What do you think?
The bottom rendering is pretty good as far as orientation goes. i'd like to see through it to the city, but also something more specific happen on the ground and some people somewhere, though i'm a bit like you and generally don't like people and so don't include them in my renderings
ReplyDeleteThe plan, i'm not sure about that bath-tub wall that it carves into. Same with section. But in addition, i feel like you have more intense sections than that from before. and something has to register in terms of the site -- like it shouldn't just rest on the ground but should have its own. What do you think?
ReplyDeleteThe texturing and the subtle coloring are starting to appeal
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