The bottom drawings really great, the actual section and plan missing the best parts of your project. The rendering looks just too simple and you need to ground that project into the plaza by redesignign the plaza, showing us interior space we cansee from outside. the plan and section drawings need a lot more quality from the drawings on the bottom. For plans, you don't have to include the site in all of them. you can have a general site plan and then articulate the actual spaces of each floor.
The bottom drawings really great, the actual section and plan missing the best parts of your project. The rendering looks just too simple and you need to ground that project into the plaza by redesignign the plaza, showing us interior space we cansee from outside. the plan and section drawings need a lot more quality from the drawings on the bottom. For plans, you don't have to include the site in all of them. you can have a general site plan and then articulate the actual spaces of each floor.
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