The drawings are totally sick (meaning good) until you get tothe final sections on the far right and then they fall flat -- the plans do also: you have so much material that you have pushed the module to the corner edge of the plane and it works as a system, but it doesn't itself promote an interestign spatial logic. i think you should take the system and slam it up also against the underside of the building from this perspective and create an entirely new entrance -- elevator core and stairwell can go in the legs of the building. Plans look way to generic. it works. that's nice but your system is loaded to totally explode and it seems so timid in those plans and really confusing in the sections with the building. All fine. we will organize a simple reconstruction for final submission.
The drawings are totally sick (meaning good) until you get tothe final sections on the far right and then they fall flat -- the plans do also: you have so much material that you have pushed the module to the corner edge of the plane and it works as a system, but it doesn't itself promote an interestign spatial logic. i think you should take the system and slam it up also against the underside of the building from this perspective and create an entirely new entrance -- elevator core and stairwell can go in the legs of the building. Plans look way to generic. it works. that's nice but your system is loaded to totally explode and it seems so timid in those plans and really confusing in the sections with the building. All fine. we will organize a simple reconstruction for final submission.
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