This is my quick rendering to show designs of the tower and my progressing models. I am wondering if I need to make the rendering in vertical direction, because I think it makes my models not clear. Or should I make the tower and model smaller?
InYoung, your renderings and your modeling are really problematic. This is nothing like you are able to create with the physical models. You have essentially planes with cutouts of your module that look like apertures and you have modules that don't seem to have any logic in their connection to each other. I think you have to make your geometry and your planes/volumes integrated. You really need to develop an architecture -- these renderings give very little sense of enclosure, or where some one could move or go to a place in your building. You need to take that successful physical model and make that the basis of your digital model. I don't really see that in these images.
overall, the renderings read a bit flat, you should control your lighting a bit more to include some more contrast, there are a lot of middle tones. best, m
InYoung, your renderings and your modeling are really problematic. This is nothing like you are able to create with the physical models. You have essentially planes with cutouts of your module that look like apertures and you have modules that don't seem to have any logic in their connection to each other. I think you have to make your geometry and your planes/volumes integrated. You really need to develop an architecture -- these renderings give very little sense of enclosure, or where some one could move or go to a place in your building. You need to take that successful physical model and make that the basis of your digital model. I don't really see that in these images.
ReplyDeleteoverall, the renderings read a bit flat, you should control your lighting a bit more to include some more contrast, there are a lot of middle tones.
ReplyDeletebest,
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